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Wednesday 24 March 2021

Planner - Creative Writing

 


The image I chose is:

My Brainstorm/Ideas

  • Is it to have a dream?

  • Dream about a once in a lifetime?


The purpose of my writing: A description, an explanation, a narrative, to persuade, a recount or a combination of different text formats

Write a maximum of 4 or 5 paragraphs to present your best writing ever!
Think about how you will engage your reader - vivid vocabulary, dazzling dialogue,
detailed descriptions, or a personal point of view!

Start your writing here….

The reason why I chose this image is because this describes children's dreams,  and also helps them give the teacher an extraordinary writing which would be like amazing ideas, and what they want to actually agree on  to do which changes their minds, and also makes them set their own great goals.

T - Tittle The Extreme light bulb 

( Intro ) There was once in a lifetime light bulb that has unrevealed secrets, and a dream that people have been waiting for. ( Info ) The Once in a lifetime light bulb! There once was a girl that had unrevealed secrets, as she was approaching her house there was a light bulb out on her door steps, as she approached the light bulb, which had colours that were so bright, as she confirmed to herself that she would shake the light bulb, as in one breath take, she shaked the light bulb as shermerd glitter teared down as she was dreaming about  travelling to Japan to have peace and calm, as she fell asleep and dreamed of a dream, when one day she felt relieved with release, as she had a day of her life time, with happiness came to laughter and kindness became love, which she enjoyed so much she didn’t want to leave. She was dreaming about climbing the Mountain  which was called the Mountain Fuji, which stands 3,776 m, which is very large, as she also experienced buying one of the square watermelons, as she was told that they are shaped like a square because it is easier to ship, also to storage in refrigerators. When it was 7:30 am before preparing for school, she clashed and opened her eyes, and her dream was unreal,  she was sad but in one thought she was  happy to experience the light bulb extreme. Which was a life changing. As she left school and approached her friends and told them about her once in a lifetime dream, her friends were so speechless and so interested in what she experienced.


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