Tuesday, 30 May 2017

Maori Village

Maori Village
We are going to write about this image, remember what we talked about this morning.

When you walk into this village in the year 1868, what do you see and here What’s happening? What can you smell?  What do you ask the people?

Start your writing here:

I walk into the village and I see Maori people.  The grey houses are made of sticks.  There is a lady wearing a white t-shirt holding a cake she is giving it to her Aunty i can see people eat on a loge. there is 5 homes made of sticks .

Haunted House Pick A Path

Haunted House Pick a Path
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Use descriptive words.

We will write the 1st paragraph together, then you will write the next paragraph by yourself.  

You’ll be writing about how you get out, make sure you use describing words.

As I walk up to the Haunted House I saw graves, I sneaked around to the back of the house.  The window is cracked but the window was too small, so I kept searching for the door. Through a cobweb filled alley, I see a door, it’s open I walk inside, I hear a baby crying.  I search the house for the baby.  I walk into find a radio on the bench, through the speaker I hear “you’re not leaving here now”.  I run for the front door.  The door is locked shut there is no way out I Went upstairs to Find my Way out Then I saw a key On The floor  Then I picked it up Then I keep Finding my way out Then I saw a Chain To unlock My way out Suddenly  I thought to myself Someone is behind me then I heard someone then i went back Inside Suddenly it was dolls Who made that noise Then I heard something smashed It was a Spooky monster Then I thought to myself This is strange Then I Heard the wind blowing the door then the Wind Blow into the kitchen Something Smashed again So She ran and find out What happened Then she saw a Dirty Mice Crowley behind the kitchen Then she Ran outside but She forgot  the key to unlock the door Then she went and grabbed It From the Table In the kitchen Then she went and unlock the door And ran so fast as she can to home .

Friday, 26 May 2017

Diving At The Pool

Diving At The Pool

What is a swimming carnival? p.2
The school swimming carnival was going to be held in three week’s time . Yasmin’s class arrived at the pool to practise .
Why doesn’t she like swimming? p.3
‘’I'm going to try out for every race’’, said Sarah , as they went to get changed . ‘’Which ones do you want to go in ?’’
Why did Yasmin feel upset? p.4
Yasmin stood at the end of the pool and looked down at the water . I’ll have one more try , she thought . She put her arms out in front of her, and flopped into the pool with a splash .
Why couldn’t Yasmin eat her dinner? p.6
That evening , Yasmin could hardly eat her dinner . ‘’What’s the matter?’’ her father asked .
How is Yasmin going to learn how to dive? p.8
On Saturday , Yasmin and Mum arrived at the pool early . They had it all to themselves , ‘’ Watch how I hold my arms and balance on the side of the pool said Mum She made a smooth dive into the water .

The Taniwha

I can see a mysterious creature hiding behind a green grass The creature has a sharp Teeth with a big Long tail The creature has a slimy Tail I can see people taking photos  Then the creature roa then the people ran so so fast as they can Then the Rocks Movie So the  creature ran To his hiding spot The people who was trying to take photos and video They were making a movie So that people who Wants to come to the movies to watch and they can came with popcorn and chocolate and the people who was  trying  to make the movie they tried to find a spot to make it so the people find a spot so they made the movie and the people was happy so they went and show the movie to the people to watch so the people went  and got a popcorn and chocolate to watch the movie and they were happy  .

The Taniwha
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Wednesday, 17 May 2017