This week you are going to be writing about the day in the life of a creature from the rocky shore. You will need to plan your ideas before you begin writing. Fill in the table below before you begin writing:
What is your rocky shore creature?
crab
Where on the rocky shore does your creature life?
It might live in the shallow water because it is small
What does your rocky shore creature do when the tide is in?
It goes in the rocks some time and it might go in the shallow water
What does your rocky shore creature do when the tide is out?
Cunjevoi are usually found on high energy rocky shores. These animals pump large amounts of water through their bodies while under water, and then filter the food out. Since they store a lot of water during low tide, they squirt when you step on them.
What does your rocky shore creature eat?
Zooplankton eat phytoplankton. Phytoplankton needs sunlight to stay alive. So the phytoplankton eats the sun and the zooplankton eat phytoplankton.
What does your rocky shore creature need to look out for? (Who eats them)
Zooplankton, Phytoplankton,
Introduction: Hook your reader
3-4 sentences setting the scene
What it is
Paragraph 1: One idea about the life of your rocky shore creature.
3-4 sentences
It digg’s in the shallow water
Paragraph 2: One idea about the life of your rocky shore creature.
3-4 sentences
It eats Zooplankton,Phytoplankton,
Paragraph 3: One idea about the life of your rocky shore creature.
3-4 sentences
It lives in the shallow water near the rocks
Conclusion: How does your story end?
3-4 sentences -does your creature survive for another day?
They like to find places in the shallow water .
A
Day in the life of a ……
Crab
One sunny morning, into the ocean underneath a damp, dark rock lives a outcoming crab, cindy.
Cindy is a crab who always ready for an adventure ahead of her. Some sunny morning she went to find a place as she, Was tring to find and place she saw a Boy,(Looks) Lucky is the Name, He is 10 years old, He has browen hair, Blue eyes, As Lucky was walking down the bech he saw Cindy a crab (Dicribing) Cindy she had a chomping hands and a red shell with a bit of Sand on it’s shell. When Lucky saw Cindy he crbbed her and then tried to pick her up but. She was about to chop my hand. Then he said to his self that it is not true that Cindy is going but. When Lucky picked her up she looked small. Then Lucky puted her in a Container. As lucky puted her in the Container she went home and then. Lucky looked at her but first he puted her in a container to keep her not going everywhere then lucky puted her in a microscope so he can see if she is ok. Then lucky said this is my pet and then mum said wow i’m so happy that you found a Crab and then mum asked where did you get her from then LUcky said. In the shallwe water and mum was so amazed. THE END...
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