Writing - Narrative Week 6 Term 2 2018 .

Writing - Narrative Week 6 Term 2 2018

   

First name	Sauma
Last name	Malofou
Year	5
Room	Ako 3
Teacher	Miss Maola

Water Bucket

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Send these animals off on an adventure together. Where are they going? How are they going to get there? How will they know where to go?





Write to narrate (tell) a story about this adventure.





What problem is caused?


How is it solved?





Think about:


where your story is set


who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel


the problem and how it is solved


the order of your ideas and how they are linked.





Remember to:


choose your words carefully


take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences


edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.











Planning Space













Start Writing Here:


Onece on a sunny day there lived a big bucket that had Animals that came and visit each day , First day they saw a bee floting in the bucket and sun shain . On the next day Beauiful Unicorns with White fur and ranbow hair . The Unicorns hair had sentened and the sentenced was Strawberry and it smell like so Amazing and beauiful sentend .





On aprl the 1th there was still animals caming to the bucket and to many was caming and they got so Squash that they Couldn't fit .So there was a Problem with the animals so like the Mice was trying to came in the bucket but to many animals so he said to everyone like the animals get off the buchet and get each animals to there house and get back with your Owned Bag so each animal Should have water .







On the Next day each animals was so happy that they can have fun all day so there where playing tag and Netball .





















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