Immersion Assembly Recount
WALT: recount a personal experience using correct sentence punctuation and sentences which make sense to the reader.
PLANNING: You now have 5 minutes to add the key words to your plan. Do not write any sentences in the boxes below.
Orientation (Introduction): How will you hook the reader?
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Who? My calss .
What? There was a big pop up .
Where? Assembly .
When? Moring .
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BODY: Describe what happened.
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Paragraph 2 (3-4 sentences)
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School Theme for Term 2:
Team 1: beach .
Team 2: sport .
Team 3 : park dancing
Team 5: tug - of war .
How did each of these teams share their inquiry topic? Watching the movie .
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Paragraph 3 (3-4 sentences)
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Team 4 Inquiry Topic: flyig
How did the Team 4 teachers share this?
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Paragraph 4 (3-4 sentences)
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Write about your favourite item from assembly.
Team 4 - flexible to fly .
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Conclusion (Summary)
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What do you want to/hope to learn about?
What do you think about the new term theme overall?
Is this different to how you felt before the assembly?
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Now that you have made a plan, it is time to write your recount in full sentence
In the moring on monday , pt england school,
teachers and students went to the hall .
As my whole school went to the hall we Started as a Kartika .
as they started team 1 was Talking about the . beach .
team 2 was Talking about .Sport .
team 3 was Talking about at the .park dancing .
team 4 was Talking about . Flexible to fly .
team 5 was Talking about .tug - of war .
so that was all the ,team 1 ,team 2 , team 3 ,team 4 , and then team 5 .
I know I have been successful writing because my recount:
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Has an orientation to tell who, what, when, where.
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2
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Recounts the experience in paragraphs in the order the events happened.
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3
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Shares my feelings about the experience at the end.
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Is written using verbs in the past tense (I saw, I walked, I felt).
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Has sentences with capital letters and full stops.
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Finished?
- Get feedback from a buddy.
- Create a drawing/image or add a photo.
- Share your writing and image on your blog:
Title
Labels: 2018, Writing, Recount, Immersion Assembly, I like to move It, Ako3
- Add the link to your blog to our class Blog Log.
Hi my name is sauma this is my Immersion Assembly Recount .
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