Hi my name is Sauma this is my workfrom class hppe you like it .
Thursday, 30 August 2018
Wednesday, 29 August 2018
Tuesday, 28 August 2018
Sheep Depression .
Points of View
~Writing~
WALT recognise, understand and use connections between oral, written and visual language.
WALT use a range of dimensions/ viewpoints in our writing.
WALT seek feedback and make changes to our writing.
TASK 1:
Watch the sheep video.
Listen to Miss West’s point of view.
Write out what Miss West says.
Compare with a friend and fix up any mistakes using a different coloured font.
Miss West’s point of view
The Mother Sheep was Folloween me arond the Blazing sky . On the top of us it Felt like we where little Ants .
TASK 2:
Write a paragraph from the point of view of the sheep.
The Sheep’s point of view
It was so so Difficult because the sheep was Chasing us on the path way .
TASK 3:
In groups of three, take 1-2 photos. In each photo, AT LEAST ONE PERSON NEEDS TO BE IN THE CAMERA SHOT.
POINT OF VIEW photos
Photo 1:
It was so so fun because we tock photos .
Photo 2:
Photos day .
TASK 4:
Choose one of the photos.
Write a paragraph from the point of view of the person taking the photo and a paragraph from the point of view of one of the people in the photo.
Photo:
Point of view of person taking the photo:
Point of view of a person in the photo:
FINAL BLOG POST LAYOUT:
Labels: Points of view, Writing, Ako 3, Term 3, 2018, Pt England School
Thursday, 23 August 2018
Tuesday, 21 August 2018
Monday, 20 August 2018
Sending a respectful and appropriate email .
Hi my name is sauma this is my work from class hop you likes it .
Keyhole Narrative .
On a sunny day there lived a Lady called Miss West she was going on a family home evening as she went out the door she saw a man and it was a police she think in her bran why is he here she just open the door and Said hi and the police said hi back .What are you here for I am here for you. What happened you stole many of money but i fond many many money in a box do you want to have a look . The police said yes pls .OK came in. It is in my Living room on the table pls have a Sit down and i will make you a Coffee as Miss West made the Coffee she came in the Living room and said here is your Coffee . The police said thank you . then the police said tell me about the many money so when I just woke up i saw many money on my table. And that is all I know from now on . the end . To be continued
Me and my friend Nature fix my work.
Hi my name is Sauma this is my work from class hope you like it .
Me and my friend Nature fix my work.
Hi my name is Sauma this is my work from class hope you like it .
Friday, 17 August 2018
Maths DIMC .
Hi my name is Sauma this is my work from Maths class but from my Maths book hop you like it .
Movie Narrative .
One Sunny day , There was a girl named Mia ,
She was a Teacher at Pt england school . Nearby she see’s a Tunnel she think’s the tunnel leeds to a Creek with an Mysterious witch , with Spider webs bugs and black floor . As she had time she walk in the Mysterious Juice black floor Tunnel . As she walk in the Tunnel it Smelt like Blueberry bugs pie and the Pastry was died fly’s . The Mysterious witch had long nose and Pointy nails it was so so amzing because she can tell the pt england school about the story ,Then Mia went back in to her car , As she went she parked her car and ran all the way back in to class as then she went and tock her class and went to Assembly as she got there ,They all sat Down and she stand up on the Stage. As she did she told all about the Story .
To be continued
Hi my name is Sauma this is my work hop you like it
Tuesday, 14 August 2018
Thursday, 9 August 2018
Narrative writing plan.
On a sunny day At school I make my Choice to learn and do my work .
As we finish our work it was lunch time then we went to the creek me and my friend .
We were trying to look for the Superhero .
Wednesday, 1 August 2018
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