Monday, 3 July 2017

Frosty And BMX Kid

Frosty and BMX Kid

Start your writing here:
Jumping off the cliff the boy did a backflip in the deep sea.   Then the boy ask god if you can do a bomb in the deep deep sea then god said yes then the boy said can you Swim then god said yes so god ran into the deep sea .

On top of the cliff god was talking to the boy about the ice cream and the powerful bomb that the man did into the deep deep sea then the boy said what is your name then the man said i don't have Any name so the man said my name Should be god So the boy started to call the man god .

Bravely god did a backflip into the deep deep sea  with a big splash Then the mountains was shaking when god came out from the sea So the boy said You did  a bigger bomb Then  my auntie Then God said Yes .

The Wake

                 The Waka
We are going to write about this image, remember what we talked about this morning.

Describe the setting, use descriptive words.  Write about your voyage in the waka to the land you are searching for.

Start your writing here: I can smell the dog coming out from the water
The dog smell like seaweed under water like a squid and i can smell
The fish under water, when i dive in i can smell the fish .

I can see people on the waka paddling like a big wave and i can see people sitting on the log .

I can hear the wave smashing on the rocks  like a big crash and i can hear the wind blowing the waka .

Kite day

Rm 11 and 12 was making a kite then we went outside to play with our kite .

Friday, 2 June 2017

No Lunch

No Lunch

Why was Addison worried at play time? p.12
Because  Addison mum had forgotten to pack his lunch .
Why was Addison’s tummy rumbling? p.13
Because Addison was hungry .
Why was he not able to think properly? p.14
Because Addison had no lunch .
Why was he going to cry? p.16
Because he was worried about his lunch .
Why is it important that we eat lunch?
Because you might be hungry .

Tuesday, 30 May 2017

Maori Village

Maori Village
We are going to write about this image, remember what we talked about this morning.

When you walk into this village in the year 1868, what do you see and here What’s happening? What can you smell?  What do you ask the people?

Start your writing here:

I walk into the village and I see Maori people.  The grey houses are made of sticks.  There is a lady wearing a white t-shirt holding a cake she is giving it to her Aunty i can see people eat on a loge. there is 5 homes made of sticks .

Haunted House Pick A Path

Haunted House Pick a Path
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Use descriptive words.

We will write the 1st paragraph together, then you will write the next paragraph by yourself.  

You’ll be writing about how you get out, make sure you use describing words.

As I walk up to the Haunted House I saw graves, I sneaked around to the back of the house.  The window is cracked but the window was too small, so I kept searching for the door. Through a cobweb filled alley, I see a door, it’s open I walk inside, I hear a baby crying.  I search the house for the baby.  I walk into find a radio on the bench, through the speaker I hear “you’re not leaving here now”.  I run for the front door.  The door is locked shut there is no way out I Went upstairs to Find my Way out Then I saw a key On The floor  Then I picked it up Then I keep Finding my way out Then I saw a Chain To unlock My way out Suddenly  I thought to myself Someone is behind me then I heard someone then i went back Inside Suddenly it was dolls Who made that noise Then I heard something smashed It was a Spooky monster Then I thought to myself This is strange Then I Heard the wind blowing the door then the Wind Blow into the kitchen Something Smashed again So She ran and find out What happened Then she saw a Dirty Mice Crowley behind the kitchen Then she Ran outside but She forgot  the key to unlock the door Then she went and grabbed It From the Table In the kitchen Then she went and unlock the door And ran so fast as she can to home .

Friday, 26 May 2017

Diving At The Pool

Diving At The Pool

What is a swimming carnival? p.2
The school swimming carnival was going to be held in three week’s time . Yasmin’s class arrived at the pool to practise .
Why doesn’t she like swimming? p.3
‘’I'm going to try out for every race’’, said Sarah , as they went to get changed . ‘’Which ones do you want to go in ?’’
Why did Yasmin feel upset? p.4
Yasmin stood at the end of the pool and looked down at the water . I’ll have one more try , she thought . She put her arms out in front of her, and flopped into the pool with a splash .
Why couldn’t Yasmin eat her dinner? p.6
That evening , Yasmin could hardly eat her dinner . ‘’What’s the matter?’’ her father asked .
How is Yasmin going to learn how to dive? p.8
On Saturday , Yasmin and Mum arrived at the pool early . They had it all to themselves , ‘’ Watch how I hold my arms and balance on the side of the pool said Mum She made a smooth dive into the water .